Some killers have no motive what so ever to kill who they kill. In this guy's case... He's a crazy stalker that killed the girl's family eventually killing her and himself
That's so scary and sad. It was written very well and the length was perfect. The foreshadowing was great, but i never imagined something so...devastating. I don't understand Luke's personality. It sorta seemed like Luke planned it...or was it something else he planned, but it just went wrong? Anyway, great job. And good luck in the contest.
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww T^T tht is so sad
and scary
That was one of the best Halloween stories I have read so far
I have a feeling I might not win this contest
my entry is in my portfolio if ya wanna check it out :D
Great story
keep up the awesoem sauce work
wolfdemonchild9
Grand Otaku | Posted 12/19/08 | Reply
that was a cool story!
DeidaraNarutoClan
Hot and Cold (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 11/15/08 | Reply
@RawrPanda:
Some killers have no motive what so ever to kill who they kill. In this guy's case... He's a crazy stalker that killed the girl's family eventually killing her and himself
RawrPanda
Otakuite | Posted 11/11/08 | Reply
i like the story... but i don't understand why he had to kill them... oh well i guess
cheriblosomchibi
Prince Hunny Bunny (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 11/10/08 | Reply
wow, thats scary. you're a good writer
mimisun
Otakuite++ | Posted 11/01/08 | Reply
this is good
I love the twist
ShizukoxIchimaru
Otakuite+ | Posted 10/30/08 | Reply
AHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!! -runs into wall- Good job... -dazed- *_* X_x
ajLOVEStobi
Otaku Legend | Posted 10/30/08 | Reply
@DeidaraNarutoClan:
oh. dam ur mean!
asialonewolfe
Otaku Legend | Posted 10/30/08 | Reply
That's so scary and sad. It was written very well and the length was perfect. The foreshadowing was great, but i never imagined something so...devastating. I don't understand Luke's personality. It sorta seemed like Luke planned it...or was it something else he planned, but it just went wrong? Anyway, great job. And good luck in the contest.
Anomaly
Internet Champion (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 10/30/08 | Reply
I don't get why >>
zero guardian
Otaku Eternal | Posted 10/30/08 | Reply
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww T^T tht is so sad
and scary
That was one of the best Halloween stories I have read so far
I have a feeling I might not win this contest
my entry is in my portfolio if ya wanna check it out :D
Great story
keep up the awesoem sauce work
ZeroSandLover13
Otaku Eternal | Posted 10/30/08 | Reply
Me:O_O.....Cool story.
Jess:Now I know I'm going to lose, Deiara has a bloody murder story.-_-'*goes into her own emo corner*
Me: Don't be so negative. Your story is good too.
Jess:My story is just scaring Naruto to hell. Deiara's story is way cooler.
Me:*sigh*You have to be positive. Well, buddy I hope you both try to win.
~Jess
DeidaraNarutoClan
Hot and Cold (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 10/29/08 | Reply
@ajLOVEStobi:
Family got killed and Inu's stomach was slashed open -_-'
ajLOVEStobi
Otaku Legend | Posted 10/29/08 | Reply
that was scary.what happend to the dog and brother?