A different approch then many. Good use of background-Edward stand out though text also draws attention making focus of wall unclear. White 'glow' around Edward nice touch. Simplistic colour desgin-works nicely. Might try to carry out the yellow through the picture, and the white bands make it look 'incomplete' so to speak. Overall good feel-captures one of the anime's main themes.

Quite interesting.... I like the concept but the picture is not great quality.