No problem at all! I hope you're feeling alright :)
Thanks for the critique...But I put that butterfly on the text on purpose. I don't exactly know why but I wanted to blend the text with the background which is a pretty weird explantion on my part...
The Dreamer (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 08/21/13 | Reply
Thank you very much for the dedication, Hifsa. I would have commented earlier, but I have been ill.
Beautiful choice of words to go with C.C.'s image of devotion and caring. Technically, there are two characters in this, but since you can't really see who is in her arms and it does go with the words, I'll accept it (way to go for pushing the envelope). For critiquing, I would like to point out the third butterfly. It doesn't blend in as well as the first two by the letters. It might the dark purple color. The first two were a really nice little accent to go with the background. Also, the shadowing on the letters does make it a bit difficult to read your beautiful passage, yet I love your font choice.
Keep it up and good luck!
Last edited by Karmira at 5:03:24 PM EDT on August 21, 2013.
OutsukaSumie
Otakuite+ | Posted 09/06/13 | Reply
@Hifsa:
Thanks^^ good luck on the challenge
Hifsa
Otaku Legend | Posted 09/06/13 | Reply
@OutsukaSumie:
Thankyou so much :D And cool avatar xD
OutsukaSumie
Otakuite+ | Posted 09/05/13 | Reply
I really like this. It's really beautiful! I love it.
Hifsa
Otaku Legend | Posted 08/22/13 | Reply
@Karmira:
No problem at all! I hope you're feeling alright :)
Thanks for the critique...But I put that butterfly on the text on purpose. I don't exactly know why but I wanted to blend the text with the background which is a pretty weird explantion on my part...
Karmira
The Dreamer (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 08/21/13 | Reply
Thank you very much for the dedication, Hifsa. I would have commented earlier, but I have been ill.
Beautiful choice of words to go with C.C.'s image of devotion and caring. Technically, there are two characters in this, but since you can't really see who is in her arms and it does go with the words, I'll accept it (way to go for pushing the envelope). For critiquing, I would like to point out the third butterfly. It doesn't blend in as well as the first two by the letters. It might the dark purple color. The first two were a really nice little accent to go with the background. Also, the shadowing on the letters does make it a bit difficult to read your beautiful passage, yet I love your font choice.
Keep it up and good luck!
Last edited by Karmira at 5:03:24 PM EDT on August 21, 2013.
Hifsa
Otaku Legend | Posted 08/06/13 | Reply
@Soulanime14:
Thankyou so much
Soulanime14
SOLDIER 1st Class (Otaku Legend) | Posted 08/05/13 | Reply
Oh this is very pretty I love the scan and background you used! The quote also fits very nicely here good job!
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