@Blue Latte:

I know, but I agree with you about it xD

@Kurihara Akane:

No, it's not like you made a mistake or anything. It's just my personal preference. ^^;;

@Blue Latte:

I made this with my troublesome laptop, so the brightness wasn't too clear on my sight, if its become too yello or too bright, I admit it was my mistake (and my laptop mistake xD)
Anywaym I made this only in 10min, there is just many flaw here.. And I am planning to fix it once I get my laptop foxed.
Thank you so much for the advice :D, I will keep what you said in mind and remake it soon :)

I love how you edited the colors, but it's too yellow for my liking. :)
Nice typography, but the text is too big in my opinion. I think it would look better if you made the font more transparent, or changed the blending mode to 'overlay' or 'soft light'.
Overall, it's a beautiful wallpaper. ;)

@Snowzi:

thanks a lot

Beautiful scan & beautiful wallie - Nicely done ^_^