I am sorry about the pixels. As you guessed, the snapshots were small. I wanted to add the title as a kind of subtext, but maybe I didn't need it. *smiles* I am really glad that the haiku brings out a lot of the feelings from that ending scene. I need to watch it again too. No need to apologize, Kira. I love reading your critiques ^^
I'm actually really surprised the typo wasn't caught before I pointed it out. FOR SHAME! *clears throat* I tease xD
You couldn't have chosen a better backdrop to set this on. That scene really does look like one from the movie. I like the images you chose for this wall, just feel they needed to be blended a bit more. I'm guessing the images were small though, so I won't give you too much grief about the pixels. The Haiku is nice, and gives a lot of feeling that you pull from the final scene of the movie *needs to watch it again now* There's something about the blue that bothers me on the left...but it seems like the title of the movie is more of a subtext, rather than something all that important.
The way you've faded the pictures together almost makes it seem like whispers, if that makes sense at all. What a beautiful haiku, and it so perfectly matches your paper. Amazing work, for certain.
Karmira
The Dreamer (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 12/30/12 | Reply
@Haitaka:
Thank you very much ^^ I'm glad the colors look that good to you.
Haitaka
Senior Otaku | Posted 12/30/12 | Reply
Great wallie ^^
All the indigo/lilac colors and the shots from the movie are really nicely incorporated here!
Karmira
The Dreamer (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 06/10/11 | Reply
@Support KIRA:
I am sorry about the pixels. As you guessed, the snapshots were small. I wanted to add the title as a kind of subtext, but maybe I didn't need it. *smiles* I am really glad that the haiku brings out a lot of the feelings from that ending scene. I need to watch it again too.
No need to apologize, Kira. I love reading your critiques ^^
Karmira
The Dreamer (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 06/09/11 | Reply
@Auraelys:
Thank you very much. Your whisper description works really well ^^
Support KIRA
Sleeping Dragon (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 05/30/11 | Reply
I'm actually really surprised the typo wasn't caught before I pointed it out. FOR SHAME! *clears throat* I tease xD
You couldn't have chosen a better backdrop to set this on. That scene really does look like one from the movie. I like the images you chose for this wall, just feel they needed to be blended a bit more. I'm guessing the images were small though, so I won't give you too much grief about the pixels. The Haiku is nice, and gives a lot of feeling that you pull from the final scene of the movie *needs to watch it again now* There's something about the blue that bothers me on the left...but it seems like the title of the movie is more of a subtext, rather than something all that important.
Gomen again, for lateness in commenting.
Auraelys
Otaku Legend | Posted 05/26/11 | Reply
The way you've faded the pictures together almost makes it seem like whispers, if that makes sense at all. What a beautiful haiku, and it so perfectly matches your paper. Amazing work, for certain.
21Emmz12
King of LLamas (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 05/26/11 | Reply
@Karmira:
I totally agree with you :D
No problem! ^^
C yz!! ^^
Alwayz BELIEVE
Karmira
The Dreamer (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 05/25/11 | Reply
@21Emmz12:
It's my favorite Miyazaki film. It's so sweet and true to real life too.
Thank you for commenting.
Last edited by Karmira at 8:44:51 PM CDT on May 25, 2011.
Karmira
The Dreamer (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 05/25/11 | Reply
@kitabug69:
Thank you, Kita. I'm glad that spectrum and blending got noticed.
21Emmz12
King of LLamas (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 05/25/11 | Reply
I like that movie ^w^
Great job on the wallie~!! & Good luck on the challenge! :D
C yaz!! C:
Alwayz BELIEVE
kitabug69
Mistress Fan Fic (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 05/25/11 | Reply
Very nice Mira... I love how it all blends with the background and the spectrum of blues and purples are awesome.
Good luck with the challenge...
*hugs and faves*
Kita