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    State Alchemist (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 05/01/09 | Reply

    ._. Wow. I'm sorry I haven't had a chance to read this but this is amazing! This is like the perfect vision of anime! I would definitely claim you the winner. (I would anyway since no one else has entered) This is an animezing poem! (Sorry. I had to put that in there. ^_^')

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    Otaku Princess | Posted 04/23/09 | Reply

    I really like this. It has a simple, yet very effective structure, and you fill it well. You also cover good ideas, without drawing them out.

    I like it!


    I'd rather see in shades of gray.