Hello there. I like your story a lot!! You have a great point of view. Until now, I've never paid much attention to Rao or thought about her in this way. You have written beautifully! Keep up the good work!
It was long but you are an amazing writer my friend, the vocabulary and the way you wrote the story are great. You are very talented and also you know I love your stories; this one was prettty interesting hehehe
I can't wait until the next part is done and I think you should create a world for it; well i think it would be better so you could concentrate on it and the ones whor read it would not be confused with other posts.
mysticwitch155
Otakuite+ | Posted 05/04/09 | Reply
Hello there. I like your story a lot!! You have a great point of view. Until now, I've never paid much attention to Rao or thought about her in this way. You have written beautifully! Keep up the good work!
vdr-07
Volcano Hamster (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 04/05/09 | Reply
It was long but you are an amazing writer my friend, the vocabulary and the way you wrote the story are great. You are very talented and also you know I love your stories; this one was prettty interesting hehehe
I can't wait until the next part is done and I think you should create a world for it; well i think it would be better so you could concentrate on it and the ones whor read it would not be confused with other posts.