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    moka27

    Otakuite+ | Posted 05/10/11 | Reply

    this is so sad but an amazing story

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    jeffhardyrox

    Otakuite++ | Posted 06/03/10 | Reply

    Aw thats so sad! Very nice, I wouldn't have been able to write that D:

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    dubninja

    Otakuite+ | Posted 02/23/10 | Reply

    sounds like me....yup its too bad i couldnt have written that .. oh well gud work!

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    ManaTatsumiya

    Otakuite+ | Posted 08/23/09 | Reply

    aw poor shikamaru.... um ino kinda crybaby there but fair enough

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    andengerz

    Otakuite | Posted 02/18/09 | Reply

    i'm not a fan of shika-ino.. but i like shikamaru anyway.. i don't like sad story but you made me finish yours.. cool work..

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    themakita

    Otaku Legend | Posted 12/08/08 | Reply

    even thought i don't support shikaino, this was freaking awesome!

    i got shivers down my back just reading it!
    :D

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    Otaku Legend | Posted 06/30/08 | Reply

    @KoInu kyan:

    Oh I see.... hehehehe!

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    Grand Otaku | Posted 06/30/08 | Reply

    @SojiRem:

    I wasn't trying to win, per se...just trying to make a point that I was young and stupid when I wrote this.

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    Otaku Legend | Posted 06/29/08 | Reply

    @KoInu kyan:

    *freaks out* Ok you win! Great job!

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    Otakuite | Posted 04/27/08 | Reply

    Wow, it's so sad and cute! You're good at this. *hug*

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    MechaTamago

    Otakuite | Posted 04/21/08 | Reply

    Its a good fan fiction Shikamaru FTW

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    ari N52

    Otakuite+ | Posted 04/17/08 | Reply

    woah......

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    sasuke0323

    Grand Otaku | Posted 04/14/08 | Reply

    aw poor shika-kun...

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    Mercury Dragon

    Otaku Legend | Posted 04/14/08 | Reply

    This was pretty good! I like it!

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    SecretMusic

    Otaku Legend | Posted 04/14/08 | Reply

    OMG that is so cool!!!
    Write more! iwant more, more, MORE!!!!!

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    Grand Otaku | Posted 04/13/08 | Reply

    WHAAAHHHH!!!! *glomps Shika-kun*
    Shika: *sigh* troublesome....
    Kaede: I feel so sorry 4 u Shika..
    Shika: Whatever, troublesome girl....
    Kaede: Fine! *hmpt!* I don't care anyway! *walks off*
    Shika: Oh geez....
    Kaede-chan!

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    tokyokisshu

    Otaku Legend | Posted 04/09/08 | Reply

    Awa. That's kinda sad. *roots around on my extremely cluttered computer desk for tissues*

    You were 12 when you wrote this? And you said you were a bad writer...!!

    Good job! ^^ *hugs and favourites*

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    Grand Otaku | Posted 04/08/08 | Reply

    @SojiRem:

    For the record, I was just a kid when I wrote this (around 12) and I just came up with the name for 'happy child'. I recently un-earthed it from various crackfics.

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    SojiRem

    Otaku Legend | Posted 04/08/08 | Reply

    Why does eyeryone think that the name Keiko has to be in every single anime story?

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    Otaku Eternal | Posted 04/08/08 | Reply

    wow this was preety long