Hai^^
I had read this part:D and I think its very good, I would usw more words for itachi and the girl, for example: for itachi: the Uchiha or Sasukes big brother and for the girl: the girl with ....hair^^
I find this part interesting, but i don't understand all, because i'm a german speaking girl, sorryv.v
keep writing
Really nice story. :3 I felt happy as I read the end. My feelings changed with how Chiizu was feeling, since you did a wonderful job conveying emotions.
ManaTatsumiya
Otakuite+ | Posted 08/22/09 | Reply
Very cool I like Chiizu-chan!
Dead Sharki
Otaku Legend | Posted 10/25/08 | Reply
Hai^^
I had read this part:D and I think its very good, I would usw more words for itachi and the girl, for example: for itachi: the Uchiha or Sasukes big brother and for the girl: the girl with ....hair^^
I find this part interesting, but i don't understand all, because i'm a german speaking girl, sorryv.v
keep writing
momo love
Grand Otaku | Posted 10/24/08 | Reply
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW........ X3
mewmewpudding
Otaku Eternal | Posted 10/24/08 | Reply
XD
Really nice story. :3 I felt happy as I read the end. My feelings changed with how Chiizu was feeling, since you did a wonderful job conveying emotions.
KoInu kyan
Grand Otaku | Posted 10/24/08 | Reply
Ian, lol , this was awsome great job describing the love concept--umm...yes, that's good, keep that. Alright. Ah--stop. seriously. stop