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    Otakuite++ | Posted 07/10/10 | Reply

    @AnimeGal816:

    :D lol i bet they are

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    Dovahkiin (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 07/09/10 | Reply

    amazing! i love poetry sooo much. <3 lol, those are some happy lost souls. XD

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    Otakuite++ | Posted 02/18/10 | Reply

    @howayoru:

    ^^

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    Grand Otaku | Posted 02/17/10 | Reply

    @Rebirth of Soul:

    its really REALLY good so I noticed >.< and I even like it!
    its a good thing you didn't change the line ^^

    -yoru

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    Otakuite++ | Posted 02/17/10 | Reply

    @howayoru:

    lolz thank you, as a matter of fact, i spent about 10 minutes deciding wehter or not to change that very line. i needed something that would catch and embrace my readers. Thank you for noticing ^^

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    Grand Otaku | Posted 02/17/10 | Reply

    you're really great~! >.< I like this! especially this last part :

    "crashing down to the ground
    with no hope of rebirth
    As the water falls
    We catch a glimpse of a lost soul
    traped in the storm
    never to let go."

    -yoru

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    Otakuite++ | Posted 02/17/10 | Reply

    Arigatou Gozaimasu! ^^