@Troublesum Shika:

Ah I see..

@Fundies HOORAH:

Actually its not that bad
The only reason its out of 42 is because of how many members Simple plan has
Its more like a 27/38

@Troublesum Shika:

Haha, that's a pretty bad score. =/

Wow! I Almost cried!!!! Its amazing, and I Agree with SpiffySporkPerson, Longer, less choppy sentences would've made it that much better.
You got a 27 out of 42
Plus 4 Bonus cause I loved it

@SpiffySporkPerson:

Hehe, Tyler read it and he saw that part and laughed. XDD

well, that was the best 10 minutes of my life reading that! :D

Awww good ending. Dude, halfway through this my brother came in and almost reported me to the parental units for reading lesbian stuff. But I let him on my computer and I think he'll forget about it. >>

When I read the part about the threesome I was like "Har har har, I see what you did there Brittany."

Yeah, the only I thing I have to say is that your sentences read choppily and you could add a few more connector words like for and nor but or yet so. Otherwise it was a good read. ^^

Dat Pierre guy is kinda hawt. lol