That seems like a nice comic, hope you can finish it. Just one thing though...I can see perfectly the drawings but it gets really hard to read the bubbles. :( I took an hour reading because my vision isnt that good. Just make sure to write with a darker pencil or even a pen or do the dialogs in the computer but that's about it. I want to know what happens next. Keep the good work.

Sincelry,

-DH.