Little Sayu (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 03/04/10 | Reply
Aww lovely finish, Manen-san!! The story is absolutely adorable<33 I really love the connections you made with their feelings too, it really adds a lot to the atmosphere ^^ The character designs were lovely as well and I adore the cover so much!
A little bit of critique though...be careful that your characters don't look too much alike! Try differentiating eye styles and such a little more ^^
Other than that, wonderful work my friend<33 Keep it up, I'm soo glad to see a manga finished!! I hope you upload Koldoon soon!! >.< (I don't care if it's toned or not..I just want to read it! LOL) =P
Wow like- LOL it pleases me to see a comic thats finished, really cute story, and it flows really well. 8.3 And even had a point to it X> HE WAS SO CUTE TOO!
I fear of dolls? I used to had this phobia of puppets when I was a kid after watching Goosebumps's Night of the Living Dummy. Slappy scared me so much, but I got over it.
LilGingerSweets
Otaku Legend | Posted 05/06/10 | Reply
Wahh! that was so cute!
It was really well written, too!
Like, you know how some mangas can be hard to follow? There was none of that! Excellent job!
I'm so happy there was a happy ending, I was scared for a second :o
Amazing job!
toyotami kun
The Marker Maniac. (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 03/11/10 | Reply
lol i really like you story! it was cute and sad too! i'm glad that there was a happy ending and it inspired me to draw!!! keep up the awesome work
Libitha
Otakuite+ | Posted 03/06/10 | Reply
Cutness owo
minimewlove
Otaku Eternal | Posted 03/05/10 | Reply
aaawwwwww that was adorable! i love it! made me smile
yokudekimashita!!! *hugs and faves*
vdr-07
Volcano Hamster (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 03/04/10 | Reply
AWWWW it was aweeeesum Manen!!!!
Artgrrl
ETERNITY (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 03/04/10 | Reply
Wow that was awesome! I loved the story and there was a happy ending yay! ^_^ Great job you should become a professional.
aragorn1014
Little Sayu (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 03/04/10 | Reply
Aww lovely finish, Manen-san!! The story is absolutely adorable<33 I really love the connections you made with their feelings too, it really adds a lot to the atmosphere ^^ The character designs were lovely as well and I adore the cover so much!
A little bit of critique though...be careful that your characters don't look too much alike! Try differentiating eye styles and such a little more ^^
Other than that, wonderful work my friend<33 Keep it up, I'm soo glad to see a manga finished!! I hope you upload Koldoon soon!! >.< (I don't care if it's toned or not..I just want to read it! LOL) =P
saiyukiluver
Senior Otaku | Posted 03/04/10 | Reply
Wow like- LOL it pleases me to see a comic thats finished, really cute story, and it flows really well. 8.3 And even had a point to it X> HE WAS SO CUTE TOO!
I label this my favorite comic on this site!! X>
Sacrificed908
Senior Otaku+ | Posted 02/22/10 | Reply
SO CUTE! Keep Going! & good luck to you!
Artgrrl
ETERNITY (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 02/17/10 | Reply
I fear of dolls? I used to had this phobia of puppets when I was a kid after watching Goosebumps's Night of the Living Dummy. Slappy scared me so much, but I got over it.
lunesoldier20
Otaku Legend | Posted 02/16/10 | Reply
Cool. I was hoping to enter the challenge myself. Much luck to you Manen! Can't wait to read the rest!
Artgrrl
ETERNITY (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 02/14/10 | Reply
Aw what a kawaii cover front
Is she supposed to be a bride?