@yatta loony:

Thanks!! I tend to pick on myself a lot...but its all for fun! I should also note that Haruka was the idea behind the Bonus Feature page!!

just seen the whole comic! this made me laugh XD

@kimokumori113:

Gosh, thank you!! I'm sure if I can figure it out, you can, too!! I studied published manga - once I got over being caught up with the story, I began to study the technique. Look for how panels...or even lack of panels...are used. Panels, like tone and shading, can be used to create a mood. Since manga artists represent their finished product visually, one can't simply write, "the man got angrier while Ren remained calm." Action scenes are represented by odd-shaped panels to create a sense of movement. And the amount of panels used on one page can be used to speed up or slow down a story. Four panels read quicker than nine. A friend of mine actually equated it to film-making...trying to figure out how each scene should look.

I must confess, I am self taught in all of this, so I went through a lot of trial and error until I finally figured it all out. And never, ever give up!

@moonlit dream:

Thanks. I actually did not like the way it was originally done...the result you see now is a re-draw.

@Kurai the night:

Awwww!! Just for that, I'm going to subscribe to you!! Thanks!!

You are not alone because you have friends here on the O and fans too.

Page 17 = awesome

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Ah...forgot to mention...there is a slight nod to Crytals on the first page....look at the background people. I know the timing is different...but I couldn't resist.

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Thanks! I've always been partial to this scene! Maybe because of the unique way it was done.

@GanonSoul:

S'funny, after I posted this I thought, gee, I should have mentioned it read traditional Japanese style. Glad you got it..sorry for the confusion! And...thanks!!

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She demands respect!

@themakita:

Thanks!! Yeah, creepy was what I was going for!!

ooooo~

looks good so far :d

and yeah, that shopkeeper was a little creepy....
no one smiles that much >->