well, your figures look too irregular and stiff...and naruto doesn't have black hair, if that's naruto. and the first page is so totally stole frow Volume 1.
Great manga! so much detail, it must have took a long time (I'm lazy, but it probably did take long) The plot line is like the series. And I agree with ShikamaruRocks, your art style is like Kishimoto's. Strange how you created it on my b-day O.o oh well... Anyways, keep up the good work! :D
I like how you make good use of existing manga pages. It's pretty cool. Not to mention your characters look quite a bit like Kishimoto's style. Nice job.
shadow the ranger
Otakuite | Posted 06/17/12 | Reply
i think this is rather good keep it up!! :3
pichu241
Otakuite | Posted 07/16/08 | Reply
what happened to neji?
PrinceRoxas
Otakuite | Posted 04/29/08 | Reply
@Sensei Ryuu:
It gets better later on. Just wait.
doggylover
Otakuite | Posted 04/24/08 | Reply
love your comic!it's so good!
Sensei Ryuu
Otaku Eternal | Posted 04/23/08 | Reply
actually, read the whole thing and it's not that bad...though a whole lotta the stuff is stolen from the naruto comics...
Sensei Ryuu
Otaku Eternal | Posted 04/23/08 | Reply
@PrinceRoxas:
yeah, i understand, I can never get a good manga outta myslef...the order of panels and all taht stuff is good though.
PrinceRoxas
Otakuite | Posted 04/23/08 | Reply
@PheonixFox:
hehehe...yeah, it was kinda for Choji, but he also did it for himself. Ninja-ing was too diffcult for him.
PrinceRoxas
Otakuite | Posted 04/23/08 | Reply
@Sensei Ryuu:
I am a starting mangaka, and this is my first attempt, so it's only natural that my figures and drawings aren't quite right.
Sensei Ryuu
Otaku Eternal | Posted 04/23/08 | Reply
well, your figures look too irregular and stiff...and naruto doesn't have black hair, if that's naruto. and the first page is so totally stole frow Volume 1.
kimokumori113
Otakuite+ | Posted 04/22/08 | Reply
HAHa good old naruto
LinUsma
Otakuite++ | Posted 04/22/08 | Reply
Ami:
OMG!!!! So cute and it looks like the art from Naruto too! Great job
Sakaira
Otaku Eternal | Posted 04/22/08 | Reply
Great manga! so much detail, it must have took a long time (I'm lazy, but it probably did take long) The plot line is like the series. And I agree with ShikamaruRocks, your art style is like Kishimoto's. Strange how you created it on my b-day O.o oh well... Anyways, keep up the good work! :D
~Sakaira
ShikamaruRocks
Otaku Legend | Posted 04/22/08 | Reply
I like how you make good use of existing manga pages. It's pretty cool. Not to mention your characters look quite a bit like Kishimoto's style. Nice job.
I like it and look forward to more^^
PheonixFox
Awesomesauce (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 04/22/08 | Reply
wow pretty good! tho tsunade and naruto's heads r missing on the cliff...
OMG shikamaru, the smartest of ANY ninja EVER 2 live, is reduced 2 serving RAMEN. he musta done it 4 choji.
cant wait 4 more!
MewMew
Master of Kittehs (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 04/22/08 | Reply
omg the detail in the top shot is amazing O_O
NinjaTofu
Otaku Legend | Posted 03/21/08 | Reply
This comic reminds me of the first episode of naruto
Darkness Tiger
Otakuite | Posted 03/20/08 | Reply
That's really good. I really like it. Write more, please.
vdr-07
Volcano Hamster (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 03/12/08 | Reply
uu it really looks onteresting soo im gonna fav! and the details are great!!
¤solange¤
gaaragirl911
Otaku Eternal | Posted 03/10/08 | Reply
lol funny are you going to make like the real comics, like they go to the mist village and stuff?
Surprise me ;]
Sapphire24Koneko
Senior Otaku+ | Posted 03/08/08 | Reply
Tee hee! It's easy to guess what they're up to!
Keep up the good work!
~Koneko
KoInu kyan
Grand Otaku | Posted 03/08/08 | Reply
Oi! Sounds fun, although I don't like NaruHina that much. XD I'm keeping up with this! BELIEVE IT! XD