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    MeowMeow4132

    Otakuite | Posted 05/05/12 | Reply

    Okay thanks for the tip I thought about that after I finished it

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    MangaKid

    Otaku Legend | Posted 05/05/12 | Reply

    This IS good! I started off by doing some comic pages like this but you're much better at shading with pencil then I was!! I love those scenes, and I was disappointed that it doesn't continue @_@ I hope that kitty doesn't get hurt!
    On thing... not judging, but just a tip. Maybe darken your panel borders a bit or separate the boxes with white gutters. Thats all^^ It'll just be easier to view that way. But for the action and the drawing, I really like it! I hope you post more, Meow-chan!