Very good for a start, But I think you were trying too hard to fit him entirly on to the page thus messing up his feet. The face is alright so long as you were looking up at him otherwise you might want to try fixing it and detailing the eyes. =^_^=

this one is very well drawn i love Gaara, work on your eyes though,look at the feet too

everythings good but the face is a little messed up

this pic is awsome i can only draw zatchbell pepole and sonic pepole and bad naruto pepole.this pic takes real talent.good luck with keep on drawing .This is awsome!!!!!!!!