wow, i luv this pic, the black an dwhite is great an dthe feathers are so perfect her expressoin is mad good too :)

ok well idk mabye its just me but i think the forehead looks a little bigbut other than that i agree with chaos and yeah those fethers are amazing! along with it as a whole!

I really like this onee! even though its sad..): you did a good job with the hair! and the feathers are very nice too, especially the physics of the feathers how they would twist and turn...^^ pens one of my fav medias...ne who, im going to crit it again...hope you dont mind. its really a great peice of art heh. thee nose doesent seem like it curves enough at the top to me..and the lips seem a *smidge* to small, but that could be your style in there too..so yea..the eye looks good, since your going more for that anime ish/realistic style..i like that. ^^ humm..andethh.. the tears look kind of akward..the tear ducts are located more towards the nose i belive, and there would wouldnt be as many individual tears as there would be streams of tears all running togethor, there's also another glad above the eye that might leak along the ridge and come down the cheek...this is an excellent drawing, im just y'now...trying to help out, feel free to do it to my art if you want. :P and last quirk i have is...the hand, ive noticed its..nail-less and the joints arent quite destinctive enough but...i did another sketch to hopefully help you out... http://i14.photobucket.com/albums/a314/Chaos_Eidolon12345/Kfchand.jpg really hope you understand my critting..some people take offense to it. XP; ne who, there you go misses..^^ ta ta! *waves*

oo...feathers...:) and the hair looks good too! and also the pen is really great! ^.^ She DOES look very sad..

She looks so sad. I think it looks good just in pen color is not neede on this one. I like the feathers. ~Red