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    Chaos Eidolon

    Senior Otaku | Posted 02/12/06 | Reply

    Hey kfc this is really good! :o your definitly getting better i can tell...but i hope you dont mind if i offer some.."constructive critisism"? ^^' its there to help you get better. hehee..:P mk...my nitpicks are.. first her eyebrow...seems like its too flat, and the end of it should curve a bit more downwards towards the eye.. and the nostril seems to be facing down, when the natural nostril is turned slightly upward.. and the top lip might look better if it were jutted out a smidgen farther than the bottom lip, unless she's going in for a kiss or something..the normal relaxed lip position has the top lip a bit farter out.. also the hair part seems to be a little misplaced, and it might look better if it were pushed back toward the ear a bit more.. and my final quirk...the ear seems a biit mis-shapen, and the inner ridge accually curves in towards the middle of the ear...and the forehead seems a bit big too...i did a quick sketch for you that might help with profiles.. http://i14.photobucket.com/albums/a314/Chaos_Eidolon12345/GirlProfile.jpg but other than that, the composition and idea in general is very goood! ^_^ nice job on the colors too..love the butterflys you implement into your style. ^^P welpp, guess thats all i gota sayy..on to the next drawing! :P

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    clockwork faerie

    Otaku Legend | Posted 02/12/06 | Reply

    *gasp* omg omg omg it's so prettttyyyy! :) i love how you do hair. and butterflies. :) but her forehead is a little big, ne? anyway, good job!

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    RedTigress

    Otaku Legend | Posted 02/12/06 | Reply

    She is so pretty!!!! I like the butterflies. you did a good job on the shading as well. ~Red