I'm a little confused about her costume. Is she wearing tights? Or is she wearing an full body spandex? I looks like she's got gloves on though. I suppose I could tell easier if it was colored. Also her middle seems a little 'stretchy'? Maybe curve her right hip out a bit more? It's just the angle that makes her middle look slightly off to me. Otherwise, I think it's great! (I love the detail you do!

HEY, CHIKKI, WHO THE HECK DO YA THINK YOU............Nah, just kidding ;D Though Tiki's design is more final, I'm still struggling with Jaz's look and even her colors. But this is a silly, violent comic story I'm doing, so of course she's gonna look over the top! But I appreciate the critique since it will help me be a better artist-I prefer a little bit of that since I don't here that much of it, so thanx anyways!

I dont like her design...XD Well, shes okey, but I dont like it when females always have to strip of their clothes to get attention. So whats up with that.. "swimsuit" of hers? Why not put on a pair of jeans? And do you know how uncomfortable that piece of clohing must be???

I like her design. She seems the innocent type...but dangerous. I like her hair. I look forward to the colored version. Keep it up!