O_O Flames Welcome?I Like It Just Work A Bit More On The Heads Is All.

flames are welcomed?...please don't get mad. GET A SCANNER!!! or at least take a digital picture of it. this person looks like darth vader, even though it's a girl. it reminds me of him. the face is too white, unless that was intentional. the hair is too...it's not smooth. take time to smooth out the edges, even if it is on the computer. the band around the neck looks too stiff. take time to make it rounder. and the shoulder...O_o just too many straight lines. what you need is to take time to smooth out the edges. it looks as though there was no editting after it was done. *sorry to say that. keep drawing though. the face is good, though. and it's good that you put an expression on her face. ^^ so keep drawing. i'm sure that your future drawings will be good.... i'd be happy to see other artworks that are not done on computer. ^^ keep drawing!