Aw, they are cute. I don't know the characters but it doesn't matter. Still we done! My main recommendation though(and this is one I give to many people)is to do line-variation with the black outlines. Make some parts of the lines thicker and thinner so it's more interesting. If you don't know what I'm talking about...you know the Yuki/Ayame line-art I had on my post the other day? Just check that out and you'll see how certain areas are thicker and thinner. This makes it more pleasing to the eye and then when you color it, it just makes the over-all piece more interesting^^

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