it looks reallly good. I think you got the shading right and I know that you can do a lot more great pictures. Anyways for future drawings good luck.

yup. the shadding came out great.. but to avoid the shadding lines.. you can use a tissue bud to "draw" over the direction of the lines.. making the lines invisible.. ^^ much better.. ^^ as for the body of kira.. ^^ well.. i think he's not that fat.. ^^ hehes.. well.. keep up with the good work!!