for those who still like to visit this once in a while, i made all this with a 0.5 mechanical pencil. cleaned it up and darkened the lines with photo shop, thats why it looks like it was drawn all in ink.

Since now I can say it is good�I like for several reasons like her bodies and faces expressions�Well done!

I think it rocks! I Want to see it when its finished.

Hey! If you want us to, we could help you. We've made a couple'o manga pages.^^

this is purly a test page. the goal is to have a full blown comic page, but have yet to make it, this was done quickly and in between classes. I just noticed, you can actually view this comic in any way you like, left to right, right to left, backwards and forwards, it all makes some sense... i also used YuYu Hakusho's extreme closeup like in their manga, emotion panal from fruit baskets manga, a hint of action talk from DBZ manga.