Eh? It doesn't look anywhere are bad as you describe. I think the nose and mouth are fine, and I have no idea what you mean by the shoulder being raised too high because it looks normal to me. And your coloring is really smooth on this one! It's a really great improvement on the last one, with the girl lying in that funky position!

The coloring and the colors are so cool!^-^ Me really love it!

Wow,the colors! The tones,shadinf lighting,all very well done! Your coloring always gives your artworks depth and a unique style! When ppl look at art,they don't pay as much atention to the flaws of one's pic as you might think...Ppl can pass by that and see for what your artpiece truly is..simply beautiful^^

Once again I am REALLY impressed with the colors. Thats the first thing I notice in all of your artwork, the colors. They stand out and don't lack anything! That's a real skill, so keep it up!