Woah! I like this one a lot! I love how you did the eyes on this one. They seem like they're almost alive! The lips themself don't look so bad. Actually, I think they look pretty good. It seems to me that it's just that the position is a little off.

I like how you did this one. hide in the background and the words. Like a wallpaper.

This one is really beautiful! The words is just a simple nice touch!Nice work!^-^

Lips are hard, reaaaaaally hard. And the lyrics make an awesome touch! Oh well if some of the shading is messed up, the shading I see in it looks pretty well done! Around his chin and neck, I just hafta say good job!

its pretty good besides the shading mess-up part. anyways, keep drawing