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    Sage of Magic

    Moe Foxgirl (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 11/13/05 | Reply

    -_-" she reminds me of a skeleton. I really hate this drawing, not cuz you criticezed it but cuz I hate her pose, hands, and well...she looks messed up. I already knew all that(except the hair part). The only thing I like about this is the shading of some areas but it's hard to see cuz the scanner killed it. yay Froogles whatever they are!

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    Kumiko Tsukimi

    Senior Otaku | Posted 11/12/05 | Reply

    Kumiko is going into critic mode! *get's shot by some critic hater* M'kay, now that I'm revived, this is really good. Her pose and expression or really good. There's always a BUT to this and every knows it's coming.... Just a few anatomical issues. I made a tutorial for Stephanie, and put it up on my page here, it's just concerning the head and shoulders. Anyway, good luck reading it.... Um, another thing is hands. I know this is the hardest thing to do. The hands seem a little small and look like there is no palm. My advice is practice. That's how I got it. I mean, do different positions with your hands and draw your hands in that position. It's really helpful. Lastly is hair. I know I'm nagging. I'm sorry. But anys, think of it this way, if you tried to draw it from a different angle, it'd look a little strange. I dunno how to explain this....it doesn't really have a definite form....I mean, it does, but it kinda seems random. Hmm....I'll do a tutorial on that too.... Uh, I hope this helps. It some suggestions. *shrug* Froogles.