WONDERFUL!! anatomy, expression, also the shading! really!! Shiori! you're great! keep doing the cool job! XD BeBe :3

wow! really good..no great work! your shading will look better if you use something to even out the tone. like smeer it with your finger works.^_^

What do you mean you're not good at shading? I'd say you're great at it! ^_^ Athrun and Cagalli ^_^ Excellent artwork ^_^

WOW THAT ISONE OF THE BEST PICS IVE SEEN DONE!! SO WELL DRAWN SO GOOD SHADING!! O MY GOODNESS THAT IS AWSOME!!!

Hey there. Your drawing's ecellent. I must agree with you, to be honest. Your shadking isn't the greatest. YOu asked for a tip or two, and I've got one. Never EVER cel shade with a pencil unless you place the shadese closer together in hue. As far as learning to shade properly, take a scrap piece of paper and start by pressing down hard on the pencil and color as you would with a crayon or colored pencil, and move down, slowly easing up on the pressure you put on the pencil, and if done right, the area should progress steadily from dark to a much lighter hue. As far as shading objects or people, take the places where the shadows are darkest and use the same princible to reach the lighter areas of your subject, and take into account where the light strikes on the subject and how the light would bounce off it, whatever it is. It's more realistic shading, but it's a start as far as teaching yourself how to cel shade with a pencil or otherwise. ^_^ Said this earlier, and I"m gonna say it again, I love the piece in general, even the shading's good, though it could use a tiny bit of work. ^_^ ~Spellcaster0019

anuther great gundam seed pic dun by u shiori hana. EXCELLENT shading!! keep up the great work!

I think the shading is fine, in fact the clothing looks reallly good! I love their expressions, hehe its so sweet!!! I like it lots!

Omgoss this picture is soooo good your are really good i could never do that