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    Otaku Eternal | Posted 06/26/05 | Reply

    I think it looks pretty good. You could probably make her body a little wider. And move the nose and mouth up a little. But I think it looks fine. Keep it up!

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    Senior Otaku | Posted 07/14/04 | Reply

    I think you should improve on the mouth, it just isn't positioned right! But the rest is perfect!

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    Senior Otaku | Posted 04/11/04 | Reply

    ways to improve? well...there's something about the head I can't put my finger on...and if you aren't planning on putting the whole person in, then cut out the bottom since it isn't necessary to have such a big blank spot on the page