Lol, thanks for the comments. I know that the standing girl has a small chest but not everyone is gifted with the males dream version of boobs. I myself am not very big and have seen more than one girl dressed in a corset looking exactly like her. Thank you for your opinions, I'm open to them all, good or bad!
-Yume
I like this drawing.the bottom girl does looked freaked out like she saw her boyfriend died or something like that.the girl standing could have a bit bigger boobs because she has revealing clothes(not to much),although u did pretty good on everything else.ur poem was also pretty good,sounds like the short,cutoff version of the green lantern creed to justice and yaddy yaddy ya stuff like that.
I like the poem too! Its good! As for the big girls boobs, i was just about to say that I LIKE THEM JUST THE WAY THEY ARE, so dont dare critisising them, big boobs are out! Shes lovely! The little girl though, she looks freaked out lol
Love the pic though!
Pretty good, I'd say that the standing girl's boobs need to be a bit fuller, even though she may be flat chested, at least make it look feminine. Also, her elbow needs to be a little more defined and the wrist thinner.
As for the girl at the bottom, I'd suggest some work on the face.
Good job, I like the poem.
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