Well, I have never heard of Cloud, and I have a feeling the I never will know what game he's from. But this is still exellent, even though I don't know who it is! Gives me a good picture in my mind! Keep up the great work!

Yay for advent children! Looks great, I like the shading!

So you were going for a bit of an advent children style here? (just asking since his hair isn't nearly as outrageous as game!Cloud XD) Pretty good for a first attempt. You did well on the outfit for the most part. I think his hair could use a little work. Cloud's hair style is pretty specific and this hair seems a little too messy. Other than that, nice work! ^_^