his eyes are definately the focal point! great job with the shading!

You did a great job on the shading and detail on Kurama's whip, the petals, hair etc. The eyes were the first thing to catch my eye, but the left eye seems to be a little off in placement, I think it should have been closer to the nose, also maybe next time try to add a bit more of reflection of light on his eyes than just darkening the out line. Other than that it looks wonderful. Keep up the great work. -sayonara