you did great but the faces are a little off if you can fix the faces it would be purfect!if you wernt my freind I would never say that>.

Not bad at all, I like it. I think this is very nicely done and I like the layout. But yes, they all look a little bit odd to me, but I'm not sure I can comment on the actual features of the characters though, having never seen the anime.

Nice! Fuu is a little bit odd-looking, and so is Mugen. Jin is the best looking, and the three objects are erally well-done. Overall I think this is a great piece. Just some fine-tuning along the way is all. ^_^