I think you did the tvvo in one thing very vvell, i've tried it vvith milliardo/zechs and it's kinda hard. But true, this may not be THE best, but hey, it's not the vvorst! But keep in mind, improvemt is needed. But vve all gotta start somevvere!

O.K. I'm going to tell it to you straight, this drawing STINKS! But I'm not going to just say that because I'm not THAT big of a jackass. First problem is it is to fat, the face, the body, but especially the face. Great idea, though!