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    Otakuite | Posted 08/26/05 | Reply

    Thanks muches for the critique. ^-^ The only thing is sairina...My arm bends like that...LoL. Quite easily actually. ::shrugs:: As for her feet... One is turned out and just a little bit farther back than the other. ...Yeah, her chest is lopsided...LOL. ^-^'

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    Otakuite | Posted 08/26/05 | Reply

    I very much like the detail with the ribbons and skirt folds. But, her left arm shouldn't bend that way (as I have tried to bend my arm like that and it hurts) If you want to put her arm like that, it is far more easy to bend in real life if her palm is facing outwards (towards the audience) than flat. Also, a more difficult detail, is her breasts are two different sizes/shapes, that and her feet are on two different heights, if you want her knee bent, both feet should still be touching the floor. Great job though! Keep up and you'll be superb!

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    Otakuite | Posted 08/25/05 | Reply

    I like this outfit very much, but I'd like to give some advice. ^^ Her feet are too small, so technically, she would tip over, and her right arm disappears behind her skirt, but her hand should be able to be seen at the bottom of it.