Most people don't comment because they don't want to tempt the rules about 'constructive' critisim. My advice to you, is to work on improving your art by taking a figure drawing class, if you are serious about this sort of thing. Your proportions are off and your line art could use a lot of work. For example, the hips and shoulders on a female should roughly be the same in proportion. The head could be a little more round and the arms are seperated into two shapes, not one noodle. Break the figure up into shapes. If you need help, here's a good site. http://www.cablenet.ne.jp/%7ejapanime/tutorial/fbody4.html

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