Wow!! The colour scheme of the characters I like. The guy looks kind of weird... maybe it's his eyes. (^^ And the girl looks... flaming with her redish hair. What I like most is the green turning to yellow!! I like the effect. Very silk like. There also a maybe you could define the sword holding hands/ fingers a little more work. Or more shape fizing! (^^ As well as the guy's body direction. The female is fine. I think the guy's torso needs alittle more ajusting.

Her hair reminds me of feathers, and his hair reminds me of a koosh ball, altogether cool especially with the shading!

Hmmm... the white kind of throws it off, but it looks pretty good. ^-^ I love how her suit is shaded, it's really nice.

I like the brother's unique hairstyle. I think the sword look great. Interesting background, though the white seems a little bothersome.