Cedric gebruik potlood dat tekent beter, en wat minder haar mag ook ;)

no its not a word but its still representative of what you want to say^^ as for the sketch, here is my advice...but you are not obligate to consider since I am not a manga-ka yet and far from being one...but anyway just make the....your hairs a little bit less .......what is the word to say that...ehm....AH yes...make the less "puffy"(weird word)..or with less volume if you want....