I don't know... I like the pose idea and the hair though my corcern about this picture is that it is on a hard angle to draw and the lines are... a bit... squeaky... like a mouse running if you see? So first thing is to be more defined about the lines and maybe the measurement of the limps. Plus... the left thigh should be a bit more pulling towards the watcher( meaning the viewer) and a big larger. (- - No harm done, right? (- - I don't mean to be offensive if I do look or input a shooking word... "I'm sorry" (- -