I agree, I think if you smooth out the hair it will look even better! you do have an original art style! I think people will reconize you for it!can you draw more Final Fanasty characters? please countinue to draw awesome pictures!you have a talent that you should never lose sight of!

While this isn't the best technical picture i've seen, I like your style! It's still very good! And just a helpful hint, try making his hair in the front a little smoother on the sides. I think that if you smoothed it out it would look even better!