Great job by the both of you! Your shading looks pretty good to me. Keep it up!

Great job. It looks really good. I really like how you draw Dave you should definalty keep it up. Ally you did another good job with the shading.... you are getting a lot better. Dave take care of Ally ok.

thats prtty good keep up the good work i think it's great

He looks fine add colors and maybe make his eyes open o.O;;; then he'll look fine