needs work

yeah,the eyes are a little too far apart,but GREAT job on the hair,i wish i was that good,no one likes my drawings anymor

cool i lilke it love the shading

love the hair! So difficult to do.. when can I see the manga?

nice pic ^_^ can u make another one with a smile?

Cute! *prints out the pic. and hugs it* I love it, its soooo cute, just like you! Love you lots Duzie

the hair is cool, i like it. i don't really think the face is too small, but the eyes may be too far apart

YAY!!! SO COOL!!!! I LOVE IT!!! AS YOU KNOW, I'M ON COFFIE!!! YAY WORK AND YAY COFFIE!!!! COOL ART!! COFFIE!!! BYE XD

ya makin the face bigger is true but when i drew this i really didnt care because this picture isnt going in my manga. also this is how his face looks just when he thinks about all his friends who have been killed bye this guy,it is justa blank stare

This is quite nice and I like the expression on his face. As if he's on his last nerve and could go off on someone at any second. Or he's skipped that point and just doesn't care anymore.

Your really good at drawing hair! But If you had to make a change i would suggest that you make the face larger. But I really think your good.