You drew her pretty plain and...rather gruesome-looking... like she's unhealthy...

Umm...It's akay, but I don't really like it much

i love the way you drew her, it's very nice. and i love the look on her face, although i think the overall pose looks a little stiff. still really well done though.

i really like the way you drew her, it's very unique, just...i can't describe it, but i know i love it ^^