i have a guy to pose... its just getting him to sit still... he's worse than a two year old!!

Wonderful job with the picture. I like the whimsical feel the coloring gave it. Her expression is fine as far as I am concerned. If you really want to make her look more worried all you would need to do is have the head looking downward a bit more. As for the guy. Good job on his face. Men are hard to do. I would suggest practicing them a bit :3. If you have a male friend kidnap him and force him to pose for you. Trust me, it helps a lot with learning to draw them ~.^

thats pretty good for a first atempt, great job. maybe the reason why she doesnt look to worried and lost bc that her hair looks to nice, lol. I dont know? just trying to help...