ill give you some critisim here.... why in gods name does "she" have Purplish spiky gay hands for here godforsaken "life" here hair could open a can of delictable cambells soup the shine on here "hair" if u will is in a staright line so why not take that pointing chin and stick it in ur main artieries..... GREAT JOB HI OH

The lyrics say "I was born an original sinner, Iwas born from original sin, and if I had a dollar bill for all the things I've done, there'd be a mountian of money piled up to my chin" Lyrics from "Missionary Man" by the Eurythmics (Old I know)Not the best drawing ever. bvut yeah. Constructive critisism appreciated.^_^