OK, first I would I would like to clear up is that your crappy work is better then my best. And and also, I want that sword! Seriously though, I can't see one thing wrong with this picture. ^-^

Well, I'll say the only thing that catches my eyes is that left leg. I think it's too near the front.If you line the ground how far a part the foot is... you might work a little bit better with legs, u see? But nice pose though... I hope you draw a skeleton line out first, right? (- o ?

i want a sword!! i don't see anything wrong with the pic! great work!

haha...i think its good...you should make everything black and white except for the blood...i think it'll look nice ^^

Ooo! Big sword! MINE! *steals and runs away to clean off blood* ^_~