Not bad. Although if you're going to keep out the black outlines try doing more shading instead of making a skin coloured outline etc. Cute outfit, proportions are accurate as far as length goes but watch out for the proportions in thickness with the thighs and lower arms etc. All together, not bad. Keep at it. ^^

(This is KuramasGirl) oh...nice! I like her dress...and her boots... heck, i like the whole pic! b^_^d

I love it!!It's so adorable!!I love the coloring...I think you coloring style is so unique and awesome^^

Ooh! how adorable!! Lovelyloelylovely Job!! =^.^= Kawaii all the way~ ^.~