No problem! But hmm I don’t think it’s that.. I think it’s just the eyes are perhaps a bit to red, like you can’t see the pupils in them. I know this is sorta a painty style so it could just be part of it and the red eyes I’m guessing are symbolizing his rage,but I feel like if there was a bit more detail in the eyes it’d help the overall expression. But honestly it’s still great either way.
Thanks for the comment Percy. Maybe the eyes are too mixed in with the eyebrows? I really appreciate the honesty you provide with your feedback. Its really valuable to me. So please express your opinions freely.
Love this! I really like the more realistic style to it, I know how hard it can be to try that approach but it looks like you’re pretty good at it! Realistic art is something I don’t think I could ever master . This also reminds I still haven’t watched the new Wolverine movie lol Also I know I’m the last person that should be recommending a critique but I think the eyes are the only thing keeping this from being almost perfect. Not sure why they just seem a bit off? I dunno.
Last edited by Percy Uzumaki at 11:24:53 PM EST on November 6, 2017.
moani1582
Otakuite+ | Posted 11/08/17 | Reply
@Percy Uzumaki:
Oh your right!!! I used red to be a place marker/fill in and forgot to change it. Oops. Lol. Great catch! I agree, i could done some more detail.
Last edited by moani1582 at 4:38:05 PM EST on November 8, 2017.
Percy Uzumaki
Otakuite | Posted 11/08/17 | Reply
@moani1582:
No problem! But hmm I don’t think it’s that.. I think it’s just the eyes are perhaps a bit to red, like you can’t see the pupils in them. I know this is sorta a painty style so it could just be part of it and the red eyes I’m guessing are symbolizing his rage,but I feel like if there was a bit more detail in the eyes it’d help the overall expression. But honestly it’s still great either way.
moani1582
Otakuite+ | Posted 11/08/17 | Reply
@Percy Uzumaki:
Thanks for the comment Percy. Maybe the eyes are too mixed in with the eyebrows? I really appreciate the honesty you provide with your feedback. Its really valuable to me. So please express your opinions freely.
Percy Uzumaki
Otakuite | Posted 11/06/17 | Reply
Love this! I really like the more realistic style to it, I know how hard it can be to try that approach but it looks like you’re pretty good at it! Realistic art is something I don’t think I could ever master . This also reminds I still haven’t watched the new Wolverine movie lol Also I know I’m the last person that should be recommending a critique but I think the eyes are the only thing keeping this from being almost perfect. Not sure why they just seem a bit off? I dunno.
Last edited by Percy Uzumaki at 11:24:53 PM EST on November 6, 2017.