Colors. So. Intense. =) Purty. Well, you have many of the same problems as in the other picture: the chest, the arms, the proportion of the legs, the neck, but here, I can point out some other things. -She's a bit of a ruler--and up and down stick due to the absence of a defined waist and hips, but that's OK, some people are really like that. -the collar bone is too far spaced; bring the two marks closer together and add more definition -this time, the arms are a tad too short; just a bit longer shoud do -the hands...well, they are the hardest part of the body to draw. The palm, honestly, should be as long or nearly as long as the fingers and the muscle of the thumb is thicker. -her shoulders are uneven--a quick fix, though -her mouth...I dunno...her expression with that mouth looks mischievously innocent, you know, like "I didn't do jack." Is that what you were aiming for? -are her feet really shaped like that (like a kangeroo's foot or something like that). A human foot is thick at the end, with the largest toe usually also being the longest--unlike hands. If her feet are not human, disregard this point -her thighs are awfully thin, no? There's nothing wrong with that, though, I just wanted to point it out since it looked a little off. -that pose...you really wouldn't be able to see the thighs that much anyways. The calves would be exaggerated, bulging from both sides because of the contraction of the leg from sitting in that position. Depth perception. Well, just work on evening things out and getting correct propotions; especially on the lower body. Try to aim for depth perception in your art as well. Oh, add shadows too!^-^