the hair look ok to me,,,and the picture looks awesome you did a good job on this one

awwww^^ i'm only reading the manga n i'm only up to #9 so i don't know what's going on... but still! this is so kyute! great job on the coloring, it looks great!

thats really somthing. {a GREAT something} i suck at painting period.

are you nuts?! this is gorgeous! It makes me wanna do this picture now! hahaha I absolutely love the BG.

this is really good, it could be better but its good